Mish is over at dVerse for haibun Monday, which I’m writing today… a day late.

She says: “Michelle Beauchamp here, (aka Mish) happy to be your host as we blend prose and poetry into Matsuo Basho’s famous form. You can explore more about Basho here.

Mish asks us to incorporate the theme of “shelter” into our haibun, adding: “If you are new to the form, a haibun is made up of no more than three tight paragraphs that are non-fiction/autobiographical and usually written in present tense. The prose is followed by a haiku that makes reference to a season with an image of nature. Often the haiku adds another depth or layer to the prose.”


Shelter from the Storm

Shadowy clouds hem the edge of the sky. All afternoon, weather bulletins sound the alarm, beware—a severe thunderstorm.

Thunder rumbles in the distance while lightning slashes the sky in jagged streaks of light. The wind pushes the rain against my glasses, blocking my sight. My weed pulling duties are now done for the day.

My phone vibrates, as if fueled by the energy of the approaching storm. “It’s a first weather alert Monday. Seek shelter now.”

summer rain
flies cling to the screens
outside my house

© Colleen M. Chesebro

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33 responses to “Haibun (Tuesday): Give Me Shelter-dVerse”

  1. I’ve become quite taken with the haibun form.

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    1. But it has haiku… 😂 Seriously, like tanka prose it’s freeing to write. 💜

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      1. Ha ha, good one, Colleen!

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  2. We had our little thunderstorm. Didn’t take much of the humidity away.
    Hubby and son were working in the driveway on some gizmo – thankfully they got it back together and working before the rain came. But just as quick as that – the rain stopped.

    Lovely haibun.

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    1. I think we had the same storm! LOL! The rain didn’t last long in my neighborhood. There were many trees down in other parts of the city. I heard plenty of people lost power, too. We were in a good spot.

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      1. We are in a valley. That rain didn’t last for long… but it was good to get.

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        1. Same here. My lawn really suffered this summer. Next summer we have to get the sprinklers fixed. It’s always something.

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          1. Like you, interior issues were on the menu this year 😉 Always something is life’s understatement ;D

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  3. Those alerts always make me jump! I hope the storm wasn’t too bad.

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    1. Same here. Our neighborhood was fine. There were trees down in other parts of the city and power outages. The rain didn’t last long.

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      1. I’m glad it wasn’t too bad. We finally got some rain last night.

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        1. And some places got too much rain and flooding. It’s crazy weather.

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  4. Also, great image of those flies!

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    1. Thanks Merril. You know when there’s a storm coming how the flies cluster on the screen, as if they know to take shelter? That’s what I was going for.

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  5. A little terrifying, but nature is impersonal. A great poem.

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  6. Inside is the place to go in a thunderstorm. (K)

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    1. Absolutely! This blew in quickly. It rained and moved on. Other parts of the city had trees down and power outages. We were lucky.

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      1. They can be sudden.

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  8. D.L. Finn, Author Avatar
    D.L. Finn, Author

    Beautiful Colleen:) I felt that storm with you and the fly!

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    1. I don’t know why the flies cling to the screens before a storm, but I can always tell when I see them. It’s kind of eerie.

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      1. D.L. Finn, Author Avatar
        D.L. Finn, Author

        I wonder if they sense they change of pressure?

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        1. That could be. It’s a good guess, I think.

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  9. I like the idea of the phone reacting to the energy of the storm…..well, I guess it did!

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    1. My phone mirrored the approach of the storm perfectly. Usually the weather folks are wrong.

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  10. Oh – that’s kinda scary, Colleen! Was it really dangerous to stay outside? Do you often get weather alerts like that?

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    1. It was a normal thunderstorm. There was damage further into town with trees down. The rain didn’t last long. It’s been a dry summer.

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  11. Well told story Sis. My fav, haibun/haiku ❤

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    1. Thanks, Sis. Tanka prose is easier to write. The haiku in the haibun trips people up. 😍

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      1. Lol, been there. ❤

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